literature

Blind Blue

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My emotions emerge, exposed and translucent
they sputter about, springing up, sparks and showers,
and the stories in my eyes wait for you
to see them, read them, find me... believe them.

A deep blue teardrop falls into clear waters

My insides roll free before your open eyes
spread out like a sheet, a map of my mind
But you must be blind or you choose not to see
for you plod upon it all, you trod upon me

and twists, twirls, spreads

You are oblivious, perceive nothing
I'm overlooked and I fade,
undisguised, undetected,
undiscovered, underpaid

like tiny crystal tendrils

I've been told before I am easy to read
and I've thrived by that each day,
But of course the one I want the most
cannot see me that way.

that slowly fade to

I've chosen to live in this cage and perhaps I'll never come out.
I've trapped myself with my very own flesh,
escape means my own pain, so I shout
Why won't you see?

become one body of pale liquid

I'm here, chained to you, and I've thrown out the key.
I've given my heart and my soul
and I hold onto "someday"s,
"nevertheless"s, and "whether or not you will"s

absorbed together, inseparable.

But still sinking somewhere
in the back of my mind...
is the "perhaps I will find...
you are truly unable to see."
I know, it's kinda...emotional. bleh.

I wrote this keeping in mind the Blue Poetry Slam contest going on at :iconthe-writers-review: [link]
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KDMB's avatar
ah, this is really wonderful.....I love the words and emotions.....fits where I am, where I'm going.....and words, I just love words, and you have a real gift with them. :)