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Falling in Love

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plump lips
      as soft as petals
rose-red
       curved up in
smiles showing
     pearls of white
from the heart of oysters
       making my
heart swim
          in turquoise oceans
the waves kicking
             up their feet
as I fall head
           over heals
...something I decided to write after reading a prompt here [link]
:) this is for both #1 and #2

what do you think of it? i think i might change the title... Title used to be "Falling in the Ocean". Like this better?
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Postmorteum's avatar
Great description!