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As prize to the first place winner of "Bring Me to Life" I am spotlighting a written piece from :iconproud-2-b-rainbow:

:clap:Congrats again on your win!:clap:

View Winning Announcement News Article Here

And now on to the feature!

"Candles and Cares" by ~proud-2-b-rainbow

Light a candle

Breathe out, but don't

blow it out

It flicker and
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breathing stops,

hold it in,
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don't let the little flame die.

It's like this everywhere

breakable,
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fragile,
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like a shining soap bubble.

Butterfly wings are easily
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pinned

and yet, they still fly

higher without fear.

Now is that moment
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without fear.

It wavers.

Fingertips stroke the flames,
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fanning them gently.

It falls over, the candle, and

sets fire
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to the stack of papers sitting there

but there is no fear.
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Not in the eyes that sparkle

in the light

of the now roaring blaze.

Start small.

Grow.


The fires of our hearts are

fanned
Fanning the FlameFanning the Flame

It is evening in a college dorm.  It is a messy room, with clothes, books, papers, student trappings flung where they were last used by the main character, batousaijin.  He is anxiously awaiting someone to come online for an instant message, snickchick, the love of his life who has moved back home to Missouri so that her parents can take care of her while she recovers from a sickness that causes occasional fainting spells, weakness, and pain.  Batousaijin spells meticulously.  He might be an English-major, or maybe he's trying to diminish the opportunities of snickchick misunderstanding what he means to say.  Snickchick doe

and we will rise in a rush
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a whoosh

and there it is!

A new day

A shining new day!
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Rain will put the fire out

eventually

but today, it will shed its heat,
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its warmth,

its love

to those who need it.

And we must do the same.
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Please fav this wonderful writing here! -> Candles and CaresLight a candle
Breathe out, but don't
blow it out
It flicker and
breathing stops,
hold it in,
don't let the little flame die.
It's like this everywhere
breakable,
fragile,
like a shining soap bubble.
Butterfly wings are easily
pinned
and yet, they still fly
higher without fear.
Now is that moment
without fear.
It wavers.
Fingertips stroke the flames,
fanning them gently.
It falls over, the candle, and
sets fire
to the stack of papers sitting there
but there is no fear.
Not in the eyes that sparkle
in the light
of the now roaring blaze.
Start small.
Grow.
The fires of our hearts are
fanned
and we will rise



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~Dani-the-Naiad Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you enjoyed this piece. I wish all the thumbs still worked. This was put together some time ago.
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*Razuri-chan Oct 22, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
thank You so much for featuring my work! :heart: :heart: <3
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:iconwitchychick24:
thanx for adding my pic here :) That's such a old picture lol. Thanks again :)
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:icondani-the-naiad:
~Dani-the-Naiad May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D No problem!
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~Dani-the-Naiad May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D No problem!
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~ALP-Dreams Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the feature. :)
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~Dani-the-Naiad Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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~qusaay Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Thank you
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~Dani-the-Naiad Apr 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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