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Winter Kisses by :iconneonsquiggle:


Your winter kisses

    are fragile snowflakes in my memory;

Beautiful, spectacular,

  coming in flurries or blizzards

    or all by themselves.

Yet they were anything but cold.

Light as a feather, more passionate than red

  drowning me in melodious flames

    from my head to my toes.


Arms around your neck
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    hands at my waist
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interlocked in our sweet embrace

Your lips meet mine

  travel down to my neck,

    to my shoulder.
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I breathe a little faster
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    and I pull myself closer.


But snowflakes disappear

  when the spring finally arrives

They melt into the tears

    I cry late at night.

When I remember how the passion
  in your kisses drained away

Like stars fading one by one

    as night bows down to day.

You stopped holding me so close

  and your lips

    never strayed far from my cheek
I bit my tongue to remind myself

    that I was too proud to show you my tears.


The tears that came with racking sobs
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  in the ungodly hours of the night

My mind giving in to delirium

    my body not putting up a fight.
They came with half-pints of half-melted ice cream

  tasteless when compared
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    to what your kisses used to be.

Bunched up sheets

  from fists curled up in anger

Dampened pillows due to tears
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    from eyes tired of sorrow
My throat burning from hoarse cries

    asking the night what I did wrong
and depression will only last so long

But for now let me wallow in my sadness
  which may last til tomorrow

    when I burn all of your letters

Or till autumn next rids
    the trees of their leaves.
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They were snowflakes in my memory
    and they melted in my hands.

Those cotton candy memories spun of sweet lies and fool's gold

  A sparkling memento of the times

    before your winter kisses finally turned cold.


Fav writing here---> Winter Kisses~

Your winter kisses
   are fragile snowflakes in my memory;
Beautiful, spectacular,
 coming in flurries or blizzards
   or all by themselves.
Yet they were anything but cold.
Light as a feather, more passionate than red
 drowning me in melodious flames
   from my head to my toes.

Arms around your neck
   hands at my waist
interlocked in our sweet embrace

Your lips meet mine
 travel down to my neck,
   to my shoulder.
I breathe a little faster
   and I pull myself closer.

But snowflakes disappear
 when the spring finally arrives
They melt into the tears
   I cry late at night.
When I remember how the passion
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:iconriza-tukudo-kun:
~Riza-Tukudo-Kun Dec 27, 2010  Student General Artist
Thanks again for the feature~ We just got snow yesterday and I'm going to try to recreate my snow picture~ ^^
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~Dani-the-Naiad Jan 6, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D Awesome!
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:iconchiarainbow:
Thank you for featuring "burn them letters!" :)
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:icondani-the-naiad:
~Dani-the-Naiad Nov 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:nod:
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:iconzindy:
*Zindy Sep 23, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks so much for the feature of my 2 drawings, appreciate it lots :aww:
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:icondani-the-naiad:
~Dani-the-Naiad Sep 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:D of course!
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:iconsuitehearts:
~suitehearts Sep 2, 2010  Student Interface Designer
thank you so much for featuring me! This was absolutely beautiful :)
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:icondani-the-naiad:
~Dani-the-Naiad Sep 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blowkiss: So glad you think so!
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:iconsnak:
Thanks for the feature!
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:icondani-the-naiad:
~Dani-the-Naiad Aug 20, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:blowkiss:
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