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Shadows of the Sun

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Fairy jewels
glint upon the
emerald blades below
where shade and sunlight
dance in grace
a waltz, beloved and slow

Pink frosting
blooms above and
melts within Her heat
where dreams awake
and fairies dream
in shadows at Her feet
[link] written to pair with this photo

keeping in mind this prompt

"A Light from the Shadow" for the Poetry Screams Contest [link]
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shadowFletcher's avatar
From the Founder of #Inspiring-Words:

I love the paradox of your title - it draws one in immediately without them even having read the first lines of the poem.
The imagery used in this piece is perfect. It's so vivid and picturesque it makes me want to be where this is happening... if that makes sense.
I actually can't see anything you might want to change. It's perfect the way it is.

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